Wednesday, February 5, 2014
Hook
What's your aspiration in life? Do you have a goal or objective desired that you would put your all into trying to achieve? If one comes to mind, how so do you keep remembrance of your goal in your daily lifestyle . When one asks me I just simply reply a sort of musical mnemonic device ; a phrase which says " You fail to plan NOT plain to fail".
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Okay, some professors will have an issue with "you," being used at all. My issue with it is that you don't use it well enough. There are two options that come to mind:
ReplyDelete1. Open up your questions to the universal "you" with some specific, big aspirations that people often have, such as being a famous actor or to own their own marketing firm or to be a lawyer or a doctor, etc. Pointing out some universal big aspirations gives your device more umph, more power!
2. Or, you could transition from asking the universal "you" to the "I" and what your "I" aspires to. I would even provide your own answer between each question so that it becomes like a Q and A in which you then transition to...this is how I remember to keep those aspirations in check.
Grammatically, instead of the screaming all caps NOT, try to use a COMMA! A comma would be the correct punctuation.
Professor A.