Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Editing Run On

Before: As we age reality seems to catch up to each one of us showing that our past aspirations may not be reachable.

After: As we age, reality seems to catch up to to each one of us , showing that our past aspirations may not be reachable. 
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  1. Professor A.February 28, 2014 at 6:50 AM

    This isn't a run-on; you just have a complex sentence that is now properly punctuating it's two dependent clauses.

    You should know that, especially because you didn't have to use any of the 5 methods for fixing run-ons!

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