Aries quote pertaining to her unconditional love for herself is meaningful to me in my daily life because it illustrates that loving yourself first is the most important thing.
Your thesis idea is great, but your sentence is wordy. You have found a great meaning within that larger quote. Now, just be more concise in the main sentence, and make sure you don't shift to "yourself." The essay is about you, not the reader.
Arie's quote reminds me that loving myself is the most important thing.
Once you get rid of all the wordiness, you could then think about adding "when" in your life you've needed that quote the most. "when friends (action)" or "when men (action)" or other areas in your life that you discuss in the essay. Set us up for specific examples by further defining the broad term of life into manageable subtopics to cover.
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ReplyDeleteYour thesis idea is great, but your sentence is wordy. You have found a great meaning within that larger quote. Now, just be more concise in the main sentence, and make sure you don't shift to "yourself." The essay is about you, not the reader.
Arie's quote reminds me that loving myself is the most important thing.
Once you get rid of all the wordiness, you could then think about adding "when" in your life you've needed that quote the most. "when friends (action)" or "when men (action)"
or other areas in your life that you discuss in the essay. Set us up for specific examples by further defining the broad term of life into manageable subtopics to cover.